As a continuation of the previous assignment, the Digital Artefact (DA) pitch, in this current task we are required to provide feedback on 3 different students’ BCM325 digital artefact pitches, in order to offer a different perspective and ultimately help each other to improve.
The first student I was assigned to provide feedback to was Naomi Nguyen, in her DA pitch about humans sourcing food from insects, rather than red meat, in order to combat food crisis and also be more environmentally sustainable. In the comment, I addressed how effectively she communicated her ideas, my thoughts on why I think her chosen topic is valuable, and suggestions on how she might direct her project, adding a link to a source I found that relates to her topic and may be beneficial in her research.
The second student I was assigned…
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