When I wrote the feedback for four of the pitches, I wanted to focus on what they could improve rather than telling them how great their idea is. I feel like constructive feedback is way more helpful than just telling someone what´s great about their projects. My comments weren´t too long because I chose to focus on what they could include in their digital artifact rather than if I liked their idea or not. I prefer getting straight to the point and not walk around the porridge (as we say in Norway). I did some research on the topics so I could include that in my comments to strengthen my feedback, but it wasn’t always as easy to find research on the different topics.

When I was commenting Elizabeth´s pitch I focused on the fact that they have chosen to use podcast as a way to share their digital artifact. Podcasts…