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Learning Assessment Task 1

For BCM325 Learning Assessment Task 1, I provided varying levels of helpful feedback depending on my peer’s Digital Artefact pitches.


Emily Koletti

Pitch: https://kolettiblog.wordpress.com/2019/03/22/digital-artefact-pitch/

My Feedback: https://kolettiblog.wordpress.com/2019/03/22/digital-artefact-pitch/comment-page-1/#comment-74

Emily is planning on creating a three part podcast series that explores different episodes of Black Mirror and discusses “the techno-paranoia throughout”. I was able to relate to this idea as a big fan of the show Black Mirror.

I believe my most useful feedback out of my three comments was for Emily. I was able to recognise the potential of her idea, but also highlight certain areas that were missing for a great DA, such as the importance of identifying a particular theme that runs throughout the three Black Mirror episodes and use it for the podcast. I also provided a link to Black Mirror technologies that exist in the real world now, and highlighted that the concept…

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