Part 2: Pitch comments analysis

Matilda

For this part of the assessment, I looked at the Digital Artefact pitches of 3 students in my class, and provided comments on their concepts. Here, I will discuss the pitches that I looked at and critically analyse the comments that I made.

The first pitch I looked at was Thriving Twenties by Tahlia.

Tahlia will continue a previous DA of a blog she created called Thriving Twenties, where she will write content for young people on topics that she finds interesting herself. For this subject, she will reconsider this concept in terms of the future. Specifically, Tahlia will look at immersion and the development of AI and attempt to incorporate this into her blog throughout the progress of her DA.

In my comment to Tahlia, I mentioned how I have a keen interest in her topic and how new technologies will transform the digital writing platform due to my…

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