Reflections on Pitch Comments and Engagement

Nicole Gentle

For BCM325, we were asked to upload an online pitch which explained what we intended to do for our digital artefacts. Below I have written my reflections on the three comments which I left on my peer’s pitches and further why I chose to suggest the ideas I left within those comments.

PITCH ONE: Designer Babies

This first pitch was really well thought out in terms of direction it was headed and content which it will deal with. Ciara’s focus on the ethics surrounding the genetic alteration of embryos to either remove disability or simply unwanted characteristics in humans is incredibly interesting. And, given that her podcast is recorded and deals with this matter in a respectful and thoughtful manner, I believe that her artefact could really enhance societal understanding of the topic and bring awareness to the ethical and physical issues relating.

In my comment, I chose to focus…

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