Here is a summary of the comments I have made on other students’ Beta presentations. In looking at my comments, I believe I have contributed through both positive reinforcement and constructive criticism.
My first Beta comment was for Josh and his digital artefact on nova/novum to be presented through a video essay.
An important piece of advice I gave Josh is the use of terminology in this particular video – “a lot of terminology you refer to is quite difficult to understand. Perhaps more colloquial terms would be effective or adding a bit more of an explanation to what this jargon means.” This is important as it reminds him that his audience is public on this blog at the moment, and to be aware of this and cater to this audience accordingly. This may lead to a better following and greater public engagement.
I have specifically addressed his proposed final…
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