BCM325 Task 1 Part 2 – commentz

Phillip's BCMS Blog

Despite commenting on BETA stage blogs, I still felt as I was commenting on the pitches. A couple of the projects I was commenting on were either at a half completion mode or just not fully realised as a digital artefact. I however, did my best to suggest more work to be done on their DA’s. Especially Lachlan Vivers’ Seasons of Change, where I thought he was focusing heavily on content and less about making it into a standard digital artefact.

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I basically suggested that he needs to expand and brand to reach an audience because from my perspective It was hard to know what his DA was initially about, especially how he explained it in his BETA video. I linked a beginners guide to an online presence blog which I hope he finds helpful to see how he can expand his knowledge and philosophic content to a specific…

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