This blog post will contain a reflection on the comments that I have made on three of my classmates digital artefact beta presentations. This being the second time I have had to provide feedback comments to I had much more confidence in how I can leave critical yet constructive comments. These comments were constructive in both it’s overall DA concept and the delivery of its DA beta presentation.

Lachy – Fashion and AI

Lachy’s presentation was an update for his DA which would be able AI being used in the Fashion Industry. In his blog post he included screenshots of the research he has already conducted and he stated in his video he posted these on his own personal Instagram. I began by stating this was a clever move in order to generate feedback straight away. He stated he has changed his delivery of his final DA submission from what…