I think these three students all have complete schedules. Each of them listened to the suggestions made by the last peer review and made appropriate changes. I think this is good.

Nicole’s DA concept is about narrative stories. Through the translation of the story wrote by Nicole(the purpose of the translation is to let me better understand her writing style and the construction of the article), I found her language style similar to the writing style I wrote in my native language. The anthropomorphic and metaphor are used to make the article more vivid. At the same time, I also praised her writing style because this writing technique can resonate with the audience, and it is easier to bring the audience into her own stories. Because Nicole’s readers are mostly from Australia and a small part of Canada, she intends to focus on these two places. Although this is true…