This post will detail the three comments I contributed on fellow BCM325 students’ DA Pitches. In all, I tried to give some honest feedback, encouragement as I commented on three pitches I enjoyed and believe have promise, as well as linking at least one source for future information the student may find useful. In critically analysing my comments as a whole, I would say they could maybe be a little more specific and insightful, although I hope the students got something out of them nonetheless.

Comment 1 – https://sanjkevin.wordpress.com/2020/03/20/bcm325-my-da-pitch/comment-page-1/?unapproved=18&moderation-hash=4e5a19e82b73711af65857b8d10512fd#comment-18

My first comment (seen above) was on a student’s blog, whom I’d never met before. Thus I tried to keep it quite formal. Sanjaya is planning on creating a video series on the future of meat, something I think is quite an interesting concept. I offered him some feedback on what I thought of his pitch and likened it to my…