I have been required to watch and then make commentary on three student’s pitches who are also in BCM325, in doing this I have been able to critically analyse my own pitch and make adjustments accordingly.

First up we had Sanjaya, he pitched a DA that would have a series of blogs on the future on meat. Sanjaya in his pitch, tosses up two options of where to take his blogs, either with where meat will be in 5 years, 10 years etc. or meat alternatives. In my comment, I decided to provide him some meat alternatives he could look into if he decides to make any blogs on that. Being vegetarian myself and having tried a variety of options I believed my best commentary would be just simply telling him my personally preference of meat alternatives and recommending he could give them a try and rate them by…