This week I was able to choose three individuals to give feedback on for their BCM325 BETA presentations. It was interesting to see the iterations they have made in their digital artefacts and how they have evolved and improved over the last few weeks.

In my first pitch feedback blog, I explained the sandwich technique I use when commenting on my peers digital artefacts. I have continued to use this technique to create constructive and positive comments to encourage further improvements.

Taylor has chosen to research artificial intelligence in the home and in popular movies. She has decided to present her research through a YouTube series (3 videos). Taylor has posted her first video and plans to post her second video during week 10. She has a thorough and well planned out project. I have provided Taylor with a few ways she could further improve her project which you…