BCM325 Blog Part1: Peer Comments


In this blog post, I will comment on the pitch of three classmates.

First comment:


My first comment is about Lia’s pitch in the form of a vlog diary in the future. Her pitch video contains academic literature and her views on vlog, and Lia’s pitch is embodied in the form of vlog. Lia’s video thought is clear and easy to understand the themes and thoughts he wants to express. I watched the vlog she took before, and I liked her vlogs. The vlog gives people a relaxed and pleasant visual experience. But throughout the blog and video, she didn’t propose any ideas for the future. Therefore, my suggestion is to envisage that vlogger can officially become a free profession in the future. Because during the entire semester last year, my DA project was similar to her, I shared the articles I had studied before with her. This is…

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