Peer comments BCM:325

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Here are links to all three student pitches discussed

Grace Mary-https://gracemaryb.blog/2021/03/19/bcm325-da-pitch/

Hayden Curley-https://curleyh.home.blog/2021/03/19/sustainable-footprint-pitch/

Bella Creswick-https://beesandbells.wordpress.com/2021/03/19/fortune-feed-pitch/comment-page-1/#comment-508

By jordan arlenghi

I commented on three very different pitch presentations to help provide constructive criticism and a outside perspective, I tried to center each reply around what I thought was significant about their project, a source that they could use, a description on the source and my own recommendation. All pitches already had been commented on so I tried to keep my replies useful to each person by discussing something that wasn’t already mention in previous replies.

This was Grace Mary’s blog about fast fashion, she intends to make three video essays analyzing the near and middle and far futures of the industry with a case study on one of the biggest contributors to fast fashion, the brand SHEIN. In…