In this post, I will be commenting on peers pitch videos and giving them feedback through a detailed response using suggested articles and reflecting on my own personal feedback I received on my pitch video and how I can improve my DA for the future.
My first comment I made was for Bella Creswick on her DA topic, Future Feed: How we will be eating in 2030
Bella talks about the future of food in 2030 and how we will be eating, what will have changed, and what new technologies could be invented?. I really liked her concept as it is unique and I haven’t seen anybody else do anything remotely similar so I am intrigued to follow along with her DA and see where it goes!
She intends on creating 3 video essays, similar to my DA, but also using Instagram as a platform to showcase her great…
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