Peer Commentary and Self-reflection | BCM325 Part A

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In this post, I will be commenting on peers pitch videos and giving them feedback through a detailed response using suggested articles and reflecting on my own personal feedback I received on my pitch video and how I can improve my DA for the future.

My first comment I made was for Bella Creswick on her DA topic, Future Feed: How we will be eating in 2030

https://beesandbells.wordpress.com/2021/03/19/fortune-feed-pitch/comment-page-1/#comment-514

Bella talks about the future of food in 2030 and how we will be eating, what will have changed, and what new technologies could be invented?. I really liked her concept as it is unique and I haven’t seen anybody else do anything remotely similar so I am intrigued to follow along with her DA and see where it goes!

She intends on creating 3 video essays, similar to my DA, but also using Instagram as a platform to showcase her great…

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