PITCH FEEDBACK: WHAT I HAVE LEARNT

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Feedback is an essential component of effective change. Feedback is crucial as it demonstrates how well we are doing, and what can be done better to improve understandings. Feedback in this subject has helped me improve my work quality, influenced my content and research decisions moving forward.

1st Comment – Katie

https://katiemediaworld.wordpress.com/2021/03/19/bcm325-the-pitch/

Concept:Looking at what travel will look like in the future, how the experience will differ and if virtual reality can create the same experience despite not physically being present at destinations.

Methodology:Weekly TikTok videos and blog posts.

Utility:Individuals who miss travelling and crave hat experience of discovery, adventure, and freedom.

Comment

Katie’s presentation was well constructed and formatted, clearly describing her project’s concept, methodology, and utility. However, she did not address what future period she was studying (short, medium, or long term), which is the clear focus of this digital artifact. Katie also lacked background…

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