Comment 1
https://lorenafarreras.wordpress.com/2021/04/26/life-on-mars-project-beta/

The first BETA which I commented on was Lorena’s, they chose to focus their DA looking into David Bowie as a futurist. They planned to do both a video essay with an accompanying blog post which would have further information about the research which is used for the video essay.
In my comment I focused on the positives of their DA. I really loved the idea of using their interests of David Bowie to create a DA which is enjoyable to research. I also love the idea of creating a video essay as I said in my comment David Bowie is known for his flamboyant style which would create some fun imagery which is appealing for a video. I also really loved how Lorena listened to the original feedback given in the pitch video to go back and reiterate the idea. This is the main purpose of…
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