As apart of our task within BCM325 we are required to critically reflect on our feedback comments we provide to other students digital artefacts. It provides an opportunity to demonstrate a professional consistency with engagement with our task and our own learning.

My first comment was on Hannah’s beta presentation. Her project focused on the future of table top games, including Dungeons and Dragons (D&D), and how the use of online platforms aid in the development of how games are played and experienced. In my comment I believe I provided some valuable feedback as a reflection on how she could potentially improve on her projects interaction with users. I was able to also demonstrate a deep reflection on her project by providing feedback and opportunities of areas to explore, including the long term future of table top. However, I did not adequate link any sources or refer directly back to…