BCM future studies- 3 Peer comments

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I commented on three of my fellow BCM future studies classmates beta videos with my own feedback and suggestions.

Steph jory’s beta video discussed her DA about the current state of retail, both in person and online, with a larger focused of the two being placed on online retail and the recent explosion the industry has had in recent years, she is creating three posts on wordpress, the first two had already been written and the last one is being created. Going into these three peer comments i wanted to open with a what i like about the DA, while i did do that last time with the pitches, the opening sentences were far too short and one post did only had one line of what I liked, in my second paragraph I had a suggested doing a case study for the last blog post, I argued that having a…

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