We have reached the BETA stage of our digital artefacts, meaning I’m to continue engaging and involving myself into my peers Digital Artefacts. I will provide comments on 3 peers BETA’s where I give my feedback and make suggestions.
Comment 1: Bella- Will 2030 taste BETA
My first comment was on Bella’s BETA. I had previously commented on her Pitch and have been following her DA which allowed me to have a good understanding of her DA and how it has progressed. As stated in my comment, Bella did a really good job of utilising Tik Tok and predicting that she would have more engagement from the platform. I suggested she incorporate short facts or pose questions in order to incorporate the Future aspect into her Tik Tok videos in order to gain more potential engagement or provide insight to her audience.
Regarding her Youtube video, it was really insightful…
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