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Above are my comments on three peers’ pitches. I am very happy that the presentations of the students I commented on are all excellent, and each has its own interesting points. Even I found similarities in their DA ideas to my pitch presentation! For example, in the second people’s pitch, I found that she is going to do a DA regarding future live music. This is such an interesting topic! My DA is also going to be relevant to the future pop-culture, which is the…