BCM 325 Blog Post 1. Pitch Comments and Critical Self Evaluation
As usual I found commenting on my peers pitches a challenging experience, but I tried to be both supportive and constructive. In my comments I provided some feedback on their pitch but mainly focused on the practicality of their DA and links to lecture materials or further research they could draw on.
First comment: “Our Medical Future”
Hi Adrian, interesting topic choice and I like how you introduced your pitch video with a background look at how nano technology has been used in science fiction movies and how these technologies are no longer science fiction but a part of our future. However, I found it a little confusing when you got to the pitch part of your DA and introduced yourself. I think you could have done that first on your video and then used…
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